Yeah, that looks really better, It sure is more 3d, and also it looks like it has a tinn layer of smoke over it, looks really nice!
What you see with a lot of people here is that they add some "tech" stuff on it, (little stripes, dots, cubes like this:https://www.wincustomize.com/window.asp?Cmd=PREVIEW&source=http://skins.stardock.com/daemonium/wallpapers/biometrique.jpg)
that should finish it... If you would do some filters over it in photoshop or something it could become 'killer', just mess arround with it