Its up now.
I would say its not a 'super' logon, but I'm glad that you're trying your hand at skinning. My recommendations would be to definately start using your own graphics for things such as the background and top panels. Understand that you dont need to use all the panels... they can be disabled by giving them a height of 0px in LogonStudio. Also, work on keeping your images smooth. Thats one of the issues when using someone elses image and scaling it up or down; you get graininess, which isnt good.
Wait a little while before you submit your next work... focus on making it more user friendly, which smooth images, and things like that.