The second panel is much improved on the first (forgetting image quality
), tho I think I'd try to incorporate the female's image more into the top of panel itself... more like a soft transition between the two, so that it blends rather than appearing as attached.
The concept is absolutely brilliant, however, and I see the HR Giger influence which I absolutely love... so when the tweaking's all done, I have no doubt this WB will be another high quality kitty malone masterpiece.
